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Poetry
Revealing
By Hellcat
25 July 2008
This one popped out of no-where.

Feed back is welcomed as always.

I don’t know what you want.
I used to;
I was just thinking about it.
Cant remember any more.

It was something simple.
Almost like peace but
Not. I thought you were going to say it,
But you never did.

It was like you wanted to.
I wanted you to.
You were so close to revealing,
That I never persuaded you.

Always thought you’d do it when,
You were good and ready.
Should I have just asked you?
Would that have made it easier to explain?

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Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 6th August 2008
Interesting way to say nothing :-) Or is it something deeper; Something you wish someone had said?

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