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Poetry
Pipe dreams
By meadowcroft1964
29 July 2008

I live in a world of pipe dreams

Where nothing has it seems

In my world I'm a great poet

Though to be truely truely honest 

I wouldn't know a sonnet 

Even if I dropped upon it 

I can't even spell
 
Well not very well

But hek what the hell

I have a story which to tell

Which I sercrete to you in secret

Writing through the night 

While my darling white Knight

Is tucked up warm and tight

He thinks I'm there as well

Which is just has bloody well

As he'll play merry hell

As he's concerned I'm not well

So prey keep my secret

Who needs sleep when pipe dreams keepest

 
 

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Written by punchy (533 comments posted) 29th July 2008
i love the unpredictable rhymes and I even more love the fact you write in secret while you knight :zzz  
P x

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