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My nanny (warning:rude)
By punchy
29 July 2008
 have I gone too far?


A magicians assistant, my Nanny
Her talent for hiding uncanny
But she frightened a crowd
 they were screaming out loud
When she pulled a white hare from her fanny

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Too far?
Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 29th July 2008
I'd say not far enough, but this is the best yet. Great stuff, Paula. 
Cheers
Your Nanny
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Oh Waaaaah again! 
 
Not too far at all - I think we should go all the way! Ha! Ha! If I concoct something truly beyond the pale, I'll have to pm you. 
 
There's something absolutely hilarious about the '(warning: rude)' signs, don't you think? I can just picture the gentler-minded GW members and visitors needing medical assistance and / or counselling to recover from some of these, followed by a long convalescence with Jane Austen. 
 
Shall we simply take over GW? I hope all this doesn't get up people's noses or on their tits! 
 
I think I'll have to post a dirge in order to stop laughing. 
 
I assume it was a pubic hare?! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Best yet. Top stuff. 
 
Phil

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