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Warning ; rude
By punchy
29 July 2008
 I'm running out of steam now, is this far enough?



I was sitting at home watching porn
My husband was mowing the lawn
 I tried hard to come
While he emptied his drum
 lucky the curtains were drawn

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Written by Phil (7007 comments posted) 29th July 2008
How far is far enough? 
 
Sounds like you're reaching the climax :eek  
 
Phil
A steam lawnmower?
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Now that's an antique worth taking to the roadshow!  
 
Ha! Ha! Ha! I weep and ache once more . . . 
 
Will no one rid me of these turbulent windy giggles?! 
 
Cheersx! 
 
Fallulah X

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