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By meadowcroft1964
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29 July 2008 |
This is not my usually style but I thought I'd try to make you laugh with me rather than cry here goes
There once was a gypsy called Rose
Who danced in undignified pose
She danced to impress
Twirl whirl undress
Striped bare her fanny hair
Showing all that she dare
To reveal a tinge of ginge
On the outer rim of her minge|
Written by Phil (7007 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | Ah, a touch of restraint hits GW!
Made me laugh. I think you may have invented a new form too. A cross between a limerick and rhyming couplets.
Phil |
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | | Very funny, agree with phil, a new form. x | Mortified
Written by meadowcroft1964 (112 comments posted) 29th July 2008 |
If I get know to the Romany race
admit to what I've written
I'll be in disgrace
I what be able to show face
They'll play holy hell
So prey for me don't tell | Laugh or Cry?
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | Well, Violet, you've given me the helpless giggles!
Hilarious and VERY rude! Marvellous.
As you know, I can cry with you, but it's such a joy for me that here you make me laugh!
Bottoms up!
John X |
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