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By punchy
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29 July 2008 |
Please refer to John's kink by Phil.
Squeezing the cream from his little flesh twinkie
John and his shlong were feeling quite kinky
he made a small noose
to strangle his goose
Thus causing the kink in his winkie
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Streuth!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | Ha! Ha! Ha! Paula!
I guess this one tops it all! Ho!
Small point ( and I'm not referring to mine own anatomy):
Line two doesn't scan! Ha! Ha! Ha!
The word 'rather' messes up the rhythm.
Better:
'John and his shlong were feeling quite kinky'
Read it aloud and . . .
See what I mean?
Respect!
What on earth will tomorrow bring?
Cheers!
Fallulah XXX |
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | Thanks that does sound better.
What with my wonky boobs and large rear and your kinked digit i think Phil has got off far too lightly  | Ho! Ho! Puuchy!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | Indeed! Lets concoct a few wicked ones for Phil tonight - loads of rhymes spring to mind . . .
Pondering - 'fill' 'kill' 'will' till' spill' 'Lil' 'bill' etc - there are loads, and I don't even use a rhyming dictionary!
And so to bed
Unless one pops into my sleepy head
(no scanning intended)
Sigh!
Cheers!
John X  |
Written by Phil (7003 comments posted) 29th July 2008 | A noose on his goose! The kinky devil.
Good stuff.
Phil |
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