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Punchy
By meadowcroft1964
29 July 2008



Punchy is a honey

Her rhymes fit the times 

A mite rude through

Extremely funny

She should let her husband join in the fun

Hopefully he'd give her some help to come.

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Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 29th July 2008
ha ha, now that made me choke on my glass of wine. 
Firstly because it was funny, secondly because my husband doesn't find me in the slightest bit funny and thirdly because well I can't really say but I wish I could. 
xxx
Ha! Ha! Ha!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Oh, brilliant, Violet - so glad you've joined in with this bit of fun. Long may it last! 
 
Punchy - you can't really say? Oh dear . . . 
 
All things should be made explicit 
Even when they're most illicit! 
 
Ho! One more to post, and then to bed . . .  
 
Cheers Both! 
 
Fallulah XXX

Written by Phil (7007 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Ho! Indeed. 
 
Phil

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