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Poetry
Phil
By punchy
30 July 2008
 This is purely fictional , honest Innocent



Picture the scene, I'm flicking my bean
Whilst reading a poem by Phil
 then a pop up appears
of Brittany Spears
And stops me from reaching my thrill
 
I try to overt my eyes from her skirt
When I suddenly feel kind of curious
Phil's helped me learn
It's girls that I yearn
But my husbands not pleased he is furious

Reviews

Written by Phil (7007 comments posted) 29th July 2008
Picture the scene - that's quite an invitation, PP. But Brittany? Erk. 
 
Enjoyed. 
 
Phil

Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 29th July 2008
I know but it rhymes with appears. she's not my cup of tea but I'm not that way inclined(yet) x
Chortling . . .
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 29th July 2008
. . . all the way to bed! 
 
This is supreme in today's hilarity stakes! 
 
Ha! Waaah! Britany? Waaah! 
 
BTW 'overt' methinks should be 'avert', but it's getting late . . . 
 
Cheers! Giggling to bed . . .  
 
Your Fallulah X

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