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Poetry
An equation of sorts
By Phil
30 July 2008
In answer to a question...

Still tongue in cheek...

Smut/pretension = less angst

A result of inverse proportion -
More smut means less angst filled commotion.
Who wants broken hearts
Over John’s body parts?
They beat over written emotion.

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mis-read!
Written by fellpony (1751 comments posted) 30th July 2008
I wondered how "John's parts beat, over written emotion". What an image. Oh god, we're at it again :)

Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 30th July 2008
keep going they just get better. 
i reckon between everyone on this site a limerick book should be created :p
Okay Guys!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 30th July 2008
Just to totally bugger the equation, a dirgy sonnet is on its way . . . without much virtue, but I need to return to some god-given angst! 
 
And if anyone can read 'arses' of any kind into, I'll buy you a virtual pint! 
 
Gimme ten minutes . . .  
 
Rears! 
 
Fallulah. X

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 31st July 2008
Well,Phil, you may not be a poet but you're funny and entertaining which, in my book, is a much greater asset. 
jane

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