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Not gnats
By Veronica_Milvus
01 August 2008
A late entry to Tuesday's smutfest.

NOT GNATS

Punchy likens her tits to the bites of a gnat

but those on my chest are much larger than that.

It takes plenty of lace and elastic and wiring

to keep them consistently northwards aspiring.

Reviews
Is this true?
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 1st August 2008
I think we should be told! 
 
Oh waaaah! Excellent piece - perfectly constructed, like the content I imagine! 
 
Oh no, stop John! 
 
The irony is that this popped up just five minutes ago while I was away in the message centre congratulating you on not getting involved!!!! 
 
Ha! Ha! Ha! What will Sue say? 
 
Cheers! 
 
John
Great poems and large breasts!
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 1st August 2008
It's just not fair :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry  
 
 
I can see the well written humour through my envy x

Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 1st August 2008
Punchy: if we ever start writing comments on spare tyres and cellulite you will probably feel very smug compared to me. 
 
And John. Sorry. I will shut up now and turn my poetic mind to higher things. It's just that once I had thought of the wiring and aspiring rhyme, I couldn't resist.
Tidy!
Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 1st August 2008
lovely - Hitchcock's North By Northwest comes to mind - not the film, of course! 
Cheers
Ha! Ha! Ha!
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 1st August 2008
Very droll, Brett! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John
And 'The Birds'?
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 1st August 2008
Oh, and wasn't there some connection with his other famous film, 'The Birds'? 
 
Not quite sure where 'Psycho' enters the picture . . . 
 
Ha! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John
Not too 'sarcy', John?
Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 1st August 2008
Do let me know when I 'm out of order! 
 
You do have a talent for the sublime, V - wonderful says Wales, cariad! 
Cheers 

Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 1st August 2008
I am not sure you are qualified to speak for the whole of Wales, Brett bach. 
 
Northeast by Northwest is what we aspire to achieve.

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 1st August 2008
Much enjoyed.  
 
Phil

Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 1st August 2008
V, cariad, I shall only speak for north Wales - not those on the wrong side of the hills! I do hope you continue to achieve your aspiration. 
Cheers
Uplifting
Written by patterjack (1194 comments posted) 3rd August 2008
for some . :grin  
 
Salvationist style almost. 
 
There are of course rumours that mountains could be made from molehills . 
 
But then we would have to encourage suppression of the masses. 
 
patterjack 
 
 

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