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Punchy again two
By meadowcroft1964
01 August 2008


Punchy the Goddess of smut

Writes rhymes of the times as such

It appears as I fear to some

They're a mite a touch to much

That they deem to reveal

Others would have us conceal

That it natural for women to lust

To crave man sexual touch 

Arousing mind loin and bust

In line with love and trust

Venus gave us desire 

To ignite mans fire

Women ultimate power

Isn't just for fun

It ensures a job gets done

New life is begun 
 

Reviews

Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 2nd August 2008
All too true Violet. It has a lot to do with the way we think as humans and it is natural to be drawn to the other sex or new life would never appear. Well done!

Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 2nd August 2008
How true Violet. We girls are still not really supposed to be that interested....!
Goddess of smut
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 4th August 2008
that is the best compliment i have ever recieved :grin  
 
I like the point you make in this one. people are so often surprised when something a bit too naughty comes out of a womans mouth(excuse the pun). 
I think sex is something that has to be laughed about, talked about And so long as us girls are in full control then done occasionally!
Very well put!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 4th August 2008
Nice one Violet! And Paula is clearly extremely chuffed about her new title - Ha! Ha! Ha! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

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