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By Katanga
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02 August 2008 |
I'm still exhausted from grappling with patterjack's astonishing quatrain of sestina's, so thought I would lower the tone today. Sorry!
Cheers!
John X
Hairless John
This bandy-legged baldicoot
would barter his arse to be hirsute,
for other coots and their cootesses,
in evening and in mourning dresses,
laugh at him in his birthday suit.
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Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 2nd August 2008 | Adorned in plumage now behold
The baldicoot won’t feel the cold –
But look at him! As bold as brass –
He shows us all his downless head.
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Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 2nd August 2008 | Hairless or arseless? I'll stick to hairless, I think. 
Phil | Downless A***!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 2nd August 2008 | Josie - a simply brilliant reposte (Sp?)
Phil - I'm arselessly in awe of you and GW!
Cheers!
Cheeky Cheekless John X | Haha
Written by mr_soul (126 comments posted) 3rd August 2008 | A pretty amusing piece, I liked this. My family's mixed in terms of keeping your hair or not, some uncles have got full heads of hair while others need to take longer to wash their faces in the morning! So I don't know which way I'm going to go lol!
Anyway, nicely done, very funny |
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | Bandy legs and bald, my you do know how to get the ladies excited, what with my small wonky breasts I feel a little GW procreation in order, I wonder how the offspring would turn out  | Really Punchy?!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | Are you suggesting recreational poetical GW procreation?
Now there's a thought!
And as for the virtual, malfigured, offspring?
I feel something coming on . . .
Ha! Phwaaaagh!
Cheers!
John X |
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