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Casanova - Because of Michael |
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By Gwynedd
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04 August 2008 |
Odious mind and black heart that kills love by infiltration
All tenderness is useless
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Written by KaydieKate (75 comments posted) 3rd August 2008 | | All I can say is: I enjoyed. |
Written by Gwynedd (83 comments posted) 3rd August 2008 | I'm glad you enjoyed. I am not a poet and will probably get booted off the poets page but this one's short enough not to offend much.
I should have higher aspirations for all my writing, all the academic aspirations and I do but a reader's enjoyment, my giving pleasure to someone else with something I've done, is the highest compliment there is. Thank you. Gwyn
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Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | Comes across with some feeling.
Phil |
Written by Gwynedd (83 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | | I know, Phil. He does that to me. It's not as black as it seems. He's impossible to hate or even dislike. A moment of anger but I'm very brief when I'm angry even in conversation. I thought that was a good moment to write a poem. I'm not a poet and the briefer my poems the better. Gwyn |
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | The "love by infiltration" line is very thought provoking.
Nice one |
Written by Gwynedd (83 comments posted) 4th August 2008 | | Thank you, Punchy. I like that line too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Gwyn |
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