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By Sir_Nigel
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06 August 2008 |
Oh deep and lovely Anna
I wish I could fix you with a spanner -
- take you into my shed,
peer into your head
strip you down, oil you, and bang you back into shape with my hammer.
Then re-assemble you
buffed up, good as new.
But you’re not a carburettor
for a 68 Lambretta
Not a bit of old machine
that I can take apart and clean
You’re a real human bean
You’re vulnerable and complex
Of the deeper, more irrational sex
I can’t take you apart
I wouldn’t know where to start
The prospect would be frightening
Though your loose screws do need tightening.
But I do worry whether
You might break down altogether.
And I don’t know what I can do
to restore the previous you.
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Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | I do miss your humour when you're away for for a while. Enjoyed this very much. A good metaphor. Your usual wit, but laced with a little regret. Phil | Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | And of course if you did take her apart and put her back together again there would always be a few parts left over that you put in a box and hope won't matter too much. Am I stretching the metaphor a bit too far? cheers jane | Clever . . . Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | . . . funny and sad. Great piece! Cheers! John | Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | "You’re vulnerable and complex Of the deeper, more irrational sex" - Now which sex are you talking about here? I thought Anna was a woman??? It's no use trying to peer into her head. It's been tried but didn't work. ha ha.
| Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | Well done Sir Nigel! A very hegleyesque piece. And I would argue that men are just as irrational as women, and the proof is that they think women are the only ones who are irrational! It's a defence mechanism when they feel thwarted. But I do know some people who could do with a mental MOT... | Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 6th August 2008 | Brilliant, I love it.
| Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 7th August 2008 | Enjoyed this very much. I particularly liked 'though your loose screws do need tightening.'. Made me laugh, and I think Veronica has hit the nail on the head with 'Hegleyesque.' Cheers |
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