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| The Circling Crow | |
| By tomjguy | ||||||
| 05 January 2006 | ||||||
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Hello, I'm new, I wrote this a few years ago but I still quite like it, would appreciate any feedback. Regards, Tom The Circling Crow
The circling crow has had ancestors
And they too admired the sourceless light
Which lifts the rare snow on which you now spin.
The crow too, and her history
Thought about the contradiction of sun
And cold, of light and brighter,
But did so in very different terms.
And the sleek crow has seen you,
Unintentionally dressed as desire, smiling
In black and grey and black.
But we look differently,
The crow and I,
She with indifference and tolerance and reflection,
I with helpless, tense restrain, Happy, with no choice but to look.
T. Guy / Nov 2001
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