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LILIES
By JohnnyD
08 August 2008
Josie's poem inspired me to write few lines about the beautiful flower from Indian point of views and importance...


Long slender and filled with fragrance
Enchanting every heart's desire
The beautiful flower is just irresistible!

Some of them are placed at altars
Some adorns on women's head
Some lay silently on the wreath

Lilies' reality is BEAUTIFUL!
Lilies tragedy is its SHORT LIFE!
Lilies power is FRAGRANCE! 

Johnny D
8th August 2008

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Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 8th August 2008
Well, I am glad that I inspired you to write these words Johnny. I agree with you. They are a majestic flower and often mentioned in the Bible. Irresistible - yes that's the word. Well written. (We say: Some adorn womens' heads) - but I have never seen this. Is this something that happens in India? They are certainly put in churches for funerals or on coffins or graves because they represent "resurrection". See note after my poem.
Very popular in India
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 8th August 2008
Yes Josie the poem I wrote is from an Indian's point of view. Women in India love Lily like anything. They use it as and whenever possible with a small garland of Lilies on their long hair... Also garland of Lilies are the most popular whenever a dead body is taken for cremation in India. 
 
I am glad you liked the poem but the credit surely goes to your powerful poem... 
 
Johnny D

Written by petitephoto (5 comments posted) 8th August 2008
Very lovely;  
And lillies are beautiful, I would like them at my wedding :) 
 
x lucy
Thank you Josie & Lucy
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 8th August 2008
I am glad I could touch the chord with you two. Lucy, my heartiest congratulations if you are getting married real soon... and yes, trust me there will be Lilies all around you on your special day. 
 
May Lilies' fragrance spread the joyous occasion of your wedding... All the very best! 
 
Johnny D

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