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My Father
By an_aspiring_writer
06 January 2006

Another inspired poem, hope you like it

Jenny xxxx

N.B. Again, please ignore the paragraph formatting.

N.N.B. NOW SORTED


My Father

Inspired by you
I felt it right to let you know
You are a saint in my eye
I only behold most treasured thoughts of you

You are the most special of all
For you have known me all my life
Yet never judged
Or told a lie

I now know I am this way because of you

You have given me my life
But more than this
You have given to me, everything I believe to be good

Blessed be my father
You are my life
Forever be my love
x x x x x x x x x

 

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Written by no1butClo (341 comments posted) 17th January 2006
I love the way this could be interpreted to be a prayer as well as a poem to a relation. I merely say that as a christian, because that's how it hits me, but it's just true and straight, and so utterly sure of itself as a work. 
 
well done :)

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