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Poetry
TEARS
By JohnnyD
09 August 2008


Emotions bottled up
Emotions overflowing
Emotions burning with anger
Emotions burning with desire
Emotions in ecstasy
Emotions full of happiness
Emotions of loss
Rolling down moist
Trickling unstoppable
First in drops
Caressing the cheeks
Drying and sticking
Leaving a salty trail
The heart feels so soothing and calm…
As it flows
Shining like a pearl
It is indeed amazing
How a few tiny drops can do wonders!


Johnny D
9th August 2008  

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Written by mr_soul (126 comments posted) 10th August 2008
Interesting piece. Tears, funny things when you think about them. Why? Hmm. Yet you can feel so much better after getting it all out, as you say, just a few drops and yet you can feel almost lighter, freer, your whole mood can shift afterwards. 
Nice piece, I liked this. Very thought-provoking
Never saw or read about them earlier...
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 10th August 2008
Thank you Mr. Soul! I am glad the poem could make you think about its beauty... 
 
I have never read about TEARS before and the topic just came in my mind and words started flowing, first in thoughts and when I sat... 
 
Now your encouraging words will make me write more and the other side of TEARS... Hope it comes out well...  
 
Take care!

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