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By Katanga
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11 August 2008 |
‘This Old Guitar’ is a title I’ve borrowed (pinched?!) from a Neil Young song, which hints at the idea that a song belongs to, and remains with, the instrument rather than the singer, and stays there long after (s)he is dead and gone, a ridiculously romantics idea, almost a ‘metaphysical conceit’, which I don’t attempt to address here!
“This old guitar ain’t mine to keep – it’s only mine for a while.” Tra-la etc.
Cheers!
John X
This Old Guitar
I wander through some chords on my guitar,
exploring rhymes and rhythms through the night,
and sing of touching you and where you are,
now all is said and sung. Well, you just might
return to me, dew-faced in melody,
look long and long into my eyes and say,
“There was no malice in our harmony.
I, too, regret that tear-struck parting day,
when we were silent, moist as my fresh grave.
Our looks were sidelong glances through the space
we left between us when we mournfully gave
our final kisses.” Now the pain I face
aches through the songs I sing for you, and tries
to burn the earth and moon, the stars, our skies.
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Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 10th August 2008 | I really liked 'moist as my fresh grave.' And the opening line - yes, I have often strummed away for what could have been hours, my mind elsewhere, before realising what I was playing at all - so I think 'wander through some chords' very well expressed. Not sure about line 6 - may be the repetition of 'long'? Cheers | Line 6! Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 10th August 2008 | Thanks Brett - yes, In changed line 6 at the last moment. Before, the previous line was ' . . . soft-eyed' and line 6 was, 'look long and hard into my eyes and say' but then I thought 'look long and hard' is a pretty crass cliche, so I went for the risky repetition of 'long and long'. I dunno! Other views more than welcome - my jury's out. I may well edit in the sober light of tomorrow . . . Thanks again Brett! Cheers! John X | Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 10th August 2008 | | It is strange, John, how we link people with certain music. My father played the accordion and I recorded him playing it. It was strange that after he died I liked just sometimes to hear his music in my home for it seemed to bring him back there for a while but at first it is quite painful. You say "Now the pain I face aches through the songs I sing for you". I can understand that. Well done. | Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 11th August 2008 | Like this, John. As a sometimes (very average) player, I can identify with this. Phil |
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