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This is a very different thing! I'm not a widow...not even married but I wanted to play around with more imagined circumstance and situations...slightly morbid but also optimistic I think! Comments welcome, as ever. The rough air does not threaten Its vow remains unbroken Clinging to the ashen jaw That clenches against this bitter cold. Spiteful, pinching almost gleefully wiping the tears from the mourners' cheeks. It does not have to wait to catch its breath. The naked, adolescent trees shiver together Branches bumping off each other Like awkward first time lovers- A wooden tinkling like a school bell. The heavy winter coats seem as thin as human skin With heavy breath, the burly men try to shrug off their regrets Their loss. Even in this sorrowful state It whistles on to its next endeavour Eagre to dance between the goosey thighs Of the latest weeping widow. Tongue out to whip the last enjoyable eddy, Right up to the centre of things. Hands dug deep in empty, unused pockets, The head disembodied and overworked Allows blind connections to swim in and out of the well-groomed vessel. In between the hollow words of the familiar stranger I uncross my legs, welcoming the breeze And oddly allow abandoned humour to take me from this unwelcome stage. A clumsy smile tumbles off my lips As I catch a glimpse of tragic irony: The argument with my mother on what's appropriate to wear. The unreasonable need for make-up Which will just be washed away. The grim shopping trip to look good for the dead. I'm dressing up for a man that does not care to look With no will to breathe And certainly no need.
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