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Poetry
On Holiday
By Katanga
16 August 2008
I have been advised to buy some shades . . .

Cheers!

John X


On Holiday

 

I find myself in Never-Never Land

upon a beach where I apply emotion

to each and every passing beauteous buttock

that titillates my eyes behind dark glasses.

Should I apply a lotion to my senses,

control myself to some extent perhaps?

I find those bottoms too appealing now,

roll over, hiding my priapic bulge

from general sight, and more specifically,

from you, my Love, eyes shut, sun-drinking there,

who wouldn’t dare to show a pubic hair

to all and sundry on the beach with us.

        What if I let it all hang out one day?

        Would you still love me any other way?

Reviews

Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 16th August 2008
Oh, what a perilous problem for a man on a beach. 
Read your book, John, and stop looking at the bottoms! 
And ditch the speedos, buy some baggier shorts!
Agreed
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 16th August 2008
Boxers are better for covert--never for overt -budgie-smuggling. 
 
Now I have been watching the Beach Volleyball in the Olympics-- a most interesting sport. No room to smuggle a budgies in those bikinis. 
 
patterjack

Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 16th August 2008
Tut tut, you don't have a beard do you? 
My dad used to take me out on a pedaloe as a child in corfu just so he could pedal past the nudist beach and then use his binoculars or camera to peep, I never knew until we got home and his photos came back from the developers, my mother was not amused. He wore very baggy swim trunks! 
Funny poem though xxx ( I had to google "priapic")

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 16th August 2008
:grin

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