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In a Garden
By Katanga
16 August 2008
A simple, silly ditty for the weekend . . .

Let's hope the sun comes out occasionally . . .

Cheers!

John X


In a garden

 

Sometimes I sit

and worship

buttercups.

 

Sometimes I lie

in wonder,

buttocks up.


Reviews

Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 16th August 2008
Buttercups/Buttocks up, superb rhyme. 
I'm hoping for some sunshine today also so I can play outside and avoid the dullness of domestic duty xxx

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 16th August 2008
Made me smile. 
 
Phil

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