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Dear Diary
By stuart
16 August 2008

With frank expression to me she turns

Asking if i will donate sperms!


Says she is ready to duplicate

But has no need of life long mate!


Conception due January

But wants us not to live as three!


Tells me the child will be quite handsome

What feelings now held to ransom!


Fly now, credibility!

What of, desirability?


What cruel games are now being played?

Heart sadly has become unmade.

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 17th August 2008
Well, that is an interesting anecdote! A nice mixture of being flattered and beig indignant comes through these lines. Well expressed!

Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 17th August 2008
The only problem with thre three people involved in this situation is that number 3's opinion has not been sought. What will he/she say when he has a lopsided family of a mother and a sperm-doner instead of a father? Many children don't like that. Very well expressed Stuart.

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