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Infinitum
By Rattle_Spear
10 January 2006
Maybe, just maybe this "World" is an experimental farm!

So, we don't know where we come from?

We are not sure where we are going to?

We are here, on mother Earth, for what it's worth.

Who cares where we came from?

Who knows where we are going?

Only the Maker knows, and it is guarded secret!

In this vast Universe, there is greater life.

There is a magnitude of galaxies.

Planets unnamed and unseen by man.

There is knowledge greater than ours.

There are places more beautiful.

People more intelligent and wiser.

Creations unimaginable...

Why worry about the future?

Let the Creator plot your destiny.

Maybe soon life will become crystal clear.

Maybe you to will meet GOD!

27/12/2004 ;-)

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Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 10th January 2006
Format to be adjusted shortly! :zzz
Unusual?...
Written by IPFaulkner (83 comments posted) 21st May 2006
This may not be a first but I bet there are few poems that make a premise of God and then recommend hedonism! Hey why worry? PARTY!!!! God will take care of it. 
 
For that I am grateful to this piece.  
 
IP
Party Time
Written by Rattle_Spear (93 comments posted) 22nd May 2006
Thanks IP 
Not even Leonardo could resist a good party or code. 
:grin

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