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About a girl.
By ReflectingGod
19 August 2008
Do that Voodoo that you do so well~

I smell men's after shave...Or body wash.
I feel scared, thrilled and angry.

I keep thinking about it and thinking about it.
Will it ever leave me alone?

Your supposed to be in hell.
Not in my head.

Are you in Limbo?
Why do I feel this way?

What you did can't be undone.
I doubt you would take it back.

Are you here because of me?
Shouldn't you be sad or angry?

Maybe I shouldn't have called your name.
I could have just left this voodoo alone.

Huh? What was that?
So, you think I am pretty?

You must be truly crazy.
Hey, you killed a lot of people.

Keep talking.
But I can see right through you!

Get it?
Yeah...It wasn't that funny.

Hey, do dead people eat pizza?

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Written by Amelia (58 comments posted) 12th September 2008
5th line: 
 
You're, not your. 
 
big difference.

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