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Stalker
By ReflectingGod
20 August 2008
It seems that My stalker-yes I said 'my stalker'- has resumed stalking me for a fifth year in a role.
I have no classes what so ever with him, yet he's always there...Following me.
My folks will not allow me to get a restraining order on him because they just think it's just a crush...I wonder what they will think if I turn up missing one day or worse-?


Note in the beginning hat she was kind -Remember in the end that she died.
It's basically the same old story, un- returned love turns into something horrid.




Tracking, Stalking, stealthy.
Beautiful, smart, targeted.

Kind smiles, friendly faces.


Miserable days, cruel tormentors.
Brighten skies, sweet dreams of you.

Awkward struck, fading welcomes.
Other cheek turned, hard to get.

Kindness mistaken, romance inspired.
Hearts on sleeves, rejection stings.


Beautiful stranger, ugly whore.

Broken promises, lust filled desires.
Stalking, waiting, hiding.

Unaware, laughter, beauty.
Struggle, cruelty, lies.

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Written by chufflebinger (4 comments posted) 26th August 2008
To me, this poem would be better if you added more to it than just the descriptive words you've put. It's very...short. However, that's good thing too. It basically depends on how you read the poem I guess. Your other poems are the short in this way too. You've got your own style :)

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