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Ross the greedy rhinosous
By meadowcroft1964
21 August 2008


Ross the greedy rhinosous

Possessed a strange lust

He just must dine all the time

On thick pink blancmange and lush custard

He wouldn't share, through well aware

That it wasn't kind he just couldn't decline

Refilling his dish with dessert so delish

Eating so much that, his trousers woundn't touch  

As his stomach would swell so much

Like hell, so ready to burst

Then would you just believe it
 
He'd heave trying to relieve it 

Making his self sick

That was his trick 

Then he'd be ready to do as he wished.

Refill and eat again his  favourite dish

Thick pink blancmange and lush custard 

Reviews

Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 23rd August 2008
Your poem, as funny as it was Violet, needs to be made into clearly defined verses for children with a clear metre and rhyming scheme, for this is what is most popular with them. "Thick pink blamange and lush custard?" - children would say "yucky". ha ha
Blancmange
Written by MattHews (45 comments posted) 27th August 2008
Reminds me of an embarrassing incident at my fifth birthday party involving an excess of trifle! Incidentally, can one still buy blancmange mix?  
 
Regards, Malcolm

Written by 1211kellie (177 comments posted) 29th August 2008
I like this Violet, but I do agree with Josie's comments. 
 
Kellie xx

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