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By meadowcroft1964
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25 August 2008 |
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Writing begun as a quest to see
Answers to questions such as why me?
Though not consciously, It was then
That words spewed forth
Vile, rank, poisonous turds
Disguised in the cloak of poatic verse
Hidden for years show once again
Cleaned and cleansed by the power of the pen
Flawed pearls of wisdom residing for all time
Held within the realm of amateur rhyme
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Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 25th August 2008 | I found the brutal honesty and vulnerability of this piece very touching, particularly the line "Cleaned and cleansed by the power of the pen", and the image of "Flawed pearls of wisdom." I believe in both, and I think that's all (and the best) any writer has to offer of himself or herself. I'm moved by this piece, Violet. Mia | Written by 1211kellie (177 comments posted) 29th August 2008 | There is alot to like about this piece and I agree with Mia about the brutal honesty. Kellie |
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