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Poetry
Longin!
By meadowcroft1964
26 August 2008


Heart so full, so desperately longin!

For bitter sweet dreams unforgotten

Probing and throbing, recalling time

Springing memories so divine

Once again I appear young

Lifes swansong as yet unsung

Blessed daydreams I abide 

Laying dosing by lovers side

Resting content on grassy bank side

Blissfully ignorant of what's to come

Intensely inhaling, life summer sun

Her subtle perfume unsuppressed

Mingle entwines with natures best

Scent of sweet meadow hay

Aroma keeping troubles at bay

Then to awake and find all gone 

Leaving me longin' longin' far to long

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Written by zee666 (51 comments posted) 31st August 2008
Apart from rhyming every line with it's subsequent line the poem was good, the imagery was good. 
Why was longin' wrote instead of longing, it detracted from then poetical words and the general poetical value of the poem.

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