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| Tidy Teenage Quickie | |
| By Paul&Mark | ||||||
| 13 January 2006 | ||||||
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This is one of a few different characters and scenarios we have been playing with and this sketch would be one of many interactions between the three characters and as this is our first time we would greatly appreciate any feedback TEENAGE GIRL LAYING ON HER BED IN EXTREMELY CLEAN AND TIDY BEDROOM ADORNED WITH POSTERS OF MCFLY DOING HOMEWORK WITH MUSIC PLAYING LOW CUT TO BEDROOM DOOR BEING BURST OPEN AND THE GIRLS FATHER WALKING INTO HER ROOM
I thought you were told to tidy this bedroom, this really won't do, its an absolute tip!
CUT TO GIRL ON THE BED LOOKING CONFUSED.....
But.....
CUT TO FATHER STANDING WITH HIS HANDS ON HIS HIPS LOOKING ROUND THE SPOTLESS ROOM AND HOMING IN ON ONE SOLITARY MAGAZINE LYING ON THE EMPTY FLOOR
No buts young lady...just get it done!
CUT TO FATHER LEAVING ROOM AND SLAMMING THE DOOR BEHIND HIM..... CUT TO GIRL GETTING OF THE BED AND PICKING UP THE ONE MAGAZINE WHICH IS ON THE FLOOR NEXT TO THE BED AND PUTTING IT ON HER DRESSING TABLE CUT TO FATHER IN A MESSY AND DIRTY KITCHEN...OVERFLOWING BIN,OPEN BLACK BIN BAGS ON FLOOR, SINK PILED HIGH WITH DIRTY POTS....MOTHER SAT AT DIRTY KITCHEN TABLE,IN HER DRESSING GOWN, SMOKING AND DRINKING FROM STAINED CUP....
Just wait till she moves out, she'll never cope on her own....that rooms a disgrace!!!
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