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Enough is enough is enough.
By ReflectingGod
27 August 2008
Enough.

I don't care for your notes.
I throw them away.
Pieces of your heart in the trash.

Leave me alone.
Go away.
Keep away.

I already talked with experts.
They agree.
You should stay away.

I am tired not depressed.
I don't trust your words.
I know you all too well.

Say I'm depressed?
Say I need a friend?
Look in the mirror Dr. Jekyll
(You'll see your Hyde)

You talk about helping me.
When you need help yourself.
Professional help.

This has gone on long enough.
Enough is enough.
I am through dealing with you.

It's one more thing I have to deal with.
Get over yourself.
I don't love you.

I don't.
I don't.
I do not.

Keep well away from me.
I am no longer  afraid.
I am so pissed off.

The pestering,The bugging,The stalking
It's all over.
Keep well away.

I hate you.
I don't fear you.
I could kill you.

Enough is enough.
I am through.
You better watch out.

(I am coming after you)

Reviews

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 27th August 2008
This starts off quite well, it is lucid and well expressed.I particularly liked :- 
Look in the mirror Dr. Jekyll 
(You'll see your Hyde) 
 
but it does get a bit manic and scary as it goes on and it's almost psychotic at the end.Was this intentional to show how stalking affects people? 
I thought it strange that you mention love. Stalking is about obsession and power it has nothing to do with love, surely?  
 
Scary stuff 
jane
You see...
Written by ReflectingGod (30 comments posted) 27th August 2008
...It depends who you are or how long the stalking has been going on. 
At first it seemed like the person was just crushing on you and then after a short course of time it turns into a obsession that lasts for a few years at first you think really nothing of it but then you start to notice the little things, the person tries to get more and more involved in your life when you want nothing but the opposite...then it becomes enough.  
You don't think you could ever harm someone or kill them but after a while your not too sure anymore. 
 
Yes, it was intentional. 
 
Thanks for your time and review. 

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