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Keep frozen.
By ReflectingGod
28 August 2008
Cold shoulder or warm hugs?

Little Girl.
Sweet little darling...
Do you know who you will be come?

A teen of despair.
A young woman of misery...
A old lady pulling out her hair.

Become a ice girl.
Freeze those who would do you harm.
Make their blood turn to frost.

Icy looks and blue lips.
What a beauty you'll become.
A frozen kiss of death.

Stay forever young in the cold.
Lay in the snow of your comfort.
Stay far away from fire.

The warmth will kill you.
The heat will burn you.
The passion could consume you.

Stay safe within the blizzard of your heart.
Never venture towards the warm...
You'll melt.


Reviews
Very evocative
Written by penny (4 comments posted) 30th August 2008
I read this and think of my small grandaughters.  
I hope they stay cool and unfreeze for the right reasons. 

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