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| Private Detective 3 | |
| By Paul&Mark | ||||
| 13 January 2006 | ||||
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Just one of a few different characters and scenarios we are playing with this sketch would be one of many focusing on the useless detective - This is our first time doing this so would appreciate any feedback
DAY. AN UNTIDY AND SMOKY OFFICE
CLOSE UP OF PRIVATE DETECTIVE ON TELEPHONE Playing away when you're on nights you say? That's not a problem... £150 per day plus expenses.. Okay .. We'll talk soon....
CLOSE UP OF PHONE BEING PUT DOWN
NIGHT QUIET SUBURBAN RESIDENTIAL STREET
CLOSE UP OF DETECTIVE SAT IN HIS CAR DRINKING COFFEE WHILST WATCHING THE FRONT OF A HOUSE
DOWNSTAIRS LIGHT GOES OFF AND SECONDS LATER FRONT UPSTAIRS BEDROOM LIGHT GOES ON
CLOSE UP OF WOMAN IN SKIMPY CLOTHING CLOSING CURTAINS AND LAUGHING
DETECTIVE ATTEMPTS TO THROW COFFEE CUP OUT OF WINDOW BUT WINDOW CLOSED DETECTIVE THEN RUNS FROM CAR TOWARDS TREE OUTSIDE BEDROOM WINDOW CARRYING LOTS OF RECORDING EQUIPMENT AND CAMERAS DETECTIVE STANDS AT BOTTOM OF TREE LOOKING UP
CUT TO DAYTIME WITH MORNING BIRDS SINGING AND CLOSE UP OF DETECTIVE SLEEPING LIKE A BABY STUCK UP THE TREE
HEAR SOUND OF CURTAINS BEING OPENED
DETECTIVE OPENS EYES WIDE
CUT TO SIDE VIEW WHICH SHOWS DETECTIVE ABOUT 10 CMS FROM WINDOW PANE
CUT TO VIEW FROM INSIDE BEDROOM OVER WOMANS SHOULDER
CLOSE UP OF DETECTIVE THROUGH WINDOW
MOUTHING THE WORDS Oh Bollocks!
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