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Poetry
Send Me
By penny
30 August 2008


Send me a blanket
Of forgotten dreams
That I might poke holes in it
And set them free.

Send me a footpath
Of rough,ragged rocks
That I might kick them aside
And forget to hide

Send me the tallest
Tower of stone
That I might climb its walls
And send pillows

Soft, feather filled

To catch my falls.

Penny 2006

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Written by Fledermaus (3506 comments posted) 3rd September 2008
Ah, this is a nice poem. A bit surrealistic, but enjoyable.

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