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Red and wavy mirror poem. |
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By zee666
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31 August 2008 |
A poem i wrote when i couldn't be bothered to turn on the TV.
'IF YOU DON'T REVIEW MY OTHER WORKS, THEN YOU ARE STEALING AND JUSTICE SHALL BE SERVED ACCORDINGLY SO MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH!'
Your incompetence is hilarious.
Reading such a piece as this, sitting in a semi-comfortable chair with a can of de-carbonized Coca-Cola at your left, eyes darting back and forth, reading of my mocking of you and yet doing nothing, fore nothing can be done.
Indeed it is true that some can consider this medium art but those have no vision, and are, in fact, blind to the possibilities of All and the universe.
God pities you, an impossible silhouette on an impossible white background, sharp-toothed and horned angels about him, while the demons spread their tales of love and justice throughout All in subtle messages.
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 31st August 2008 | | erm.. zee...? Why do you think this is apoem and not three paragraphs of rather ranty prose? |
Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 31st August 2008 | Sorry, zee - not for me. Not, in my opinion, poetry. I suspect it's trying to be a little clever - but it doesn't quite come off.
Perhaps it's me.
Phil | Shame you didn't turn on the TV
Written by Brett (1001 comments posted) 31st August 2008 | And there's some shite on that!
I do hope your opening line was intended to be ironic!
For such appalling poetry you're gathering quite a fan club!
Sorry, but I have run out of patience (and possibly manners) with the amount of 'poets' who don't consider poetry to be worthy of their attention. |
Written by grace (173 comments posted) 1st September 2008 | Hello zee,
this is certainly confusing. The title, "Red and wavy mirror poem." would imply to me that you're talking to yourself!
This is certainly not poetry as I know it but I know you can enjoy the form, so I'm puzzled that you would attack it as an art.
It's almost as though this is God speaking to you through your image in the mirror.
Well, OK, I've probably lost it but that's how it reads to me,
fascinating, Pamx |
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