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Zucchini Chronicles
By briarcroft
01 September 2008
When too much of a good thing is simply too much...

It started innocently enough in April
With two-leaf seedlings labeled green and golden,
Non-descript squash plants harboring
Hidden potential.

By June the plants crept across the ground with vines
Reaching past the beans to greet the cucumbers,
Going where no vine has gone before
To divide and conquer, leaving no dust untouched.

July buds form blossoms inviting bees deep
Into yellow-throated pollen pools
Thickening within days to elongating flesh:
Fecund eros in action before our eyes.

The finger-like projections at first harvested
Too small, but temptation overwhelms patience;
Sauted, grilled with garlic, superb in
Supreme simplicity.

But come back a day later: hose-like vines
Pumping into each squash, progressively inflated like
Balloon-man balloons to be twisted and transformed
But too plump, too distended, too insatiable.

It's a race to keep up with the pace of production
Eat some, give them away, leave on doorsteps like abandoned kittens,
In boxes in church lobbies, lunch rooms at work,
Food banks posting signs: "No more zucchini please!"

They march in formation in the garden path
As they are yanked swelling from their umbilical cords
And lined up,  stacked,  multiplying
Like the brooms of the "Sorcerer's Apprentice".

Then on to the compost pile, a fresh foundation,
In a scant few months of warm decomposition,
In dead of winter, with steam rising,
A seedling, innocent enough, pokes through exploding with potential:

Run for your lives~

Reviews

Written by grace (173 comments posted) 1st September 2008
Brilliant!  
 
I wish you lived near me. 
 
You made me laugh all through but particularly with this: 
 
In boxes in church lobbies, lunch rooms at work, 
Food banks posting signs: "No more zucchini please!"  
 
and 
 
Like the brooms of the "Sorcerer's Apprentice." 
 
Loved it, thank you, Pamx
You say zucchini, we say courgettes...
Written by Veronica_Milvus (794 comments posted) 1st September 2008
Loved this, absolutely packed with imagery and indeed something for all the senses. My favourites were: 
 
the whole of the rather vegetable-erotic third stanza 
 
"hose-like vines 
Pumping into each squash" 
 
"leave on doorsteps like abandoned kittens" 
 
and the final march of the sinister zucchini like something out of The Day of the Triffids, taking over the world. 
 
If they are this easy to grow, maybe even I will have a go... 
 
what an imagination.

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