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| sun dance | |
| By dougle | ||||
| 15 January 2006 | ||||
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this is still a work in progress and its not fully written (it should be longer), but im quite pleased with it and i rarely actual try to rhyme in my poems, tell me what you think. oh and any ideas for a decent title? In your raven hair a blossom shows A perfect pink flower, and time slows
The suns stops in the sky to watch you dance Its golden gaze seeming to take the chance
A perfect flower against your perfect beauty To dance would seem your perfect duty
To spin and twirl, to step and weave And all the while the sun won't leave
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