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Two Cleaved Haikus
By Katanga
02 September 2008

Still enjoying experimenting with this fiendish new form . . .

Sorry for the awful punny title!

Cheers Footy and All!

John X


                              Mourning Morning 

   Lightning cleaves the sky, thunderbolts crash down,
       taking dawn's virginity, beseaching our forgiveness,
   mocking morning's peace as the birds scatter.

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keep them coming
Written by footy (38 comments posted) 2nd September 2008
hi John 
I have started a Cleave poetry blog called 'The Cleave' to put Cleave poems on. 
You will keep copyright etc etc. 
 
I will hopefully have time to put some on this weekend. 
Thanks for your enthusiasm,  
I do hope it spreads! 
 
PT
Me too!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 2nd September 2008
Thank you PT. 
 
A weird one coming soon . . , 
 
And yes, hope it spreads!  
 
Like legs - sorrry! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

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