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Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
I take it all back. Top class!
Phil |
Cheers Phil!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
I was hoping to win you over in the end - but what a way to do it!
Ha! Ha!
John |
Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
Anybody would admire a crossword in the shape of...  |
Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
| Nice one, I think these cleave poems are a great invention. It seems that on the left side a verb is missing, but I guess it must be hard enough to do create three working poems in one. These even rhyme!! |
Missing verb?
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
Thank you Fledermaus!
I know it's clumsy, but what missing verb?
I'm more than intrigued!
Please elucidate . . .
Cheers!
John X |
Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
Oh, I misread it, my fault.
I read: "A pair of breasts meet my requests for two fine boobs are not hairy moobs", but I see that was probably meant with a comma where I saw a verb  |
Indeed, Maus!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
Thanks! The whole thing hinges on the double syntactical use of 'for'.
On the left it functions as a bound morpheme for the infinitive.
On the right it functions as a conjunctive particle of cause and effect,
Well spotted!
Pretentious - Moi?
Ha! Ha! Ha!
I weep, but am very happy that you're reading my poor stuff!
Beers again!
John X
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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3567 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
Is moob a word? I know you're a teacher so I'm sure it is a word and I'm just showing my ingnorance.
You do seem to be taking to this form like a moob to water [or what ever it is]
jane |
Oh Jane!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008 |
I am really chuffed that you have seen and even reviewed this!
Yes, 'moob' is a newish word - it means 'man-boob'.
I'm sure you know what this is alll about?
The two pendular fatty appendages on middle-aged men'supper chests?
Luckily I'm thin as a rake, so do not suffer from these . . .
But so many do . . .
Ho! Ho!
Beers and Cheers!
John X |
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 7th September 2008 |
| In my absence, John, I see that you have moved upwards and onwards from your usual subject of bottoms. lol. If men had to live with the constant irritation of bras, would they find breasts so appealing? I think not!! I agree with all the former reviews. Gret fun. |
Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 7th September 2008 |
| As a young man, I was constantly irritated by bras. |
Written by grace (173 comments posted) 7th September 2008 |
Brilliant!
Pamx  |
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