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Poetry
Love
By emilio
06 September 2008
Yes, quite an overrated subject to tap on.  For a minute though, or even less than that,
 I felt what love REALLY is.  Here is that small expression.

           



            true love,
            if done right, would not reproduce or nurture anymore than             what we have been suffused with in this life.

            humanity with love,
            true love, would stop the motor of the world.

            many say, at least the prophets and wise ones,
            work and the blood that enigmatically pumps our life is                 love?

             
            love,
            true love, stops what we have and crumbles its images of the             world and colors to a dream thinner than air itself, nude.

Reviews

Written by Brett (987 comments posted) 6th September 2008
Not an overrated subject - but certainlty the most abused word in the english language. 
 
I don't think the layout helps this piece. 
 
Cheers
What layout?
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008
There is none - unless the random selection of line-stops equals layout? 
 
Sorry - but this would benefit from some organising. 
 
Cheers! 
 
John
What layout?
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 6th September 2008
There is none - unless the random selection of line-stops equals layout? 
 
Sorry - but this would benefit from some organising. 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

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