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| .Hero.Villian-Forgiveness. | |
| By ReflectingGod | ||||
| 08 September 2008 | ||||
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A poem about hate, love and forgiveness. At once the world crumbled at my feet For a second I lost sight of my other half Forever it took me to realize what I was I am only one-third without you. You use to sing me to sleep I use to hold you close in slumber But the fire pulled us apart I ripped us to shreds. I was caught up in the scene Hopped on the band wagon Without a second thought I hated to admit I missed you. When I returned home you were there You changed, you were whole Not broken in pieces like when I found you You were so different. The smile was the same But not as rare as it use to be You were so happy... Without me. But when I looked into your eyes I saw the hurt and longing that was there You didn't forget me I could never forget you. My love I am sorry So sorry for the hurt and lies So sorry for I all I've done Can you forgive me?
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