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Poetry
My End
By Katanga
11 September 2008
For Phil, who asked for this . . .

Beers!

John X



My End

I intend
to meet my end
on a frivolously regular basis.

However, I fear,
as my end draws near,
no fun - eternal stasis.

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 11th September 2008
Nice one. see, that's why there are people who believe in an afterlife. It'd be quite boring to be dead if there isn't... 
 
Liked the rhyme scheme.
Thanks!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 11th September 2008
But unsure what your kind review refers to . . .  
 
But you've got me thinking! 
 
The piece was meant as pure smuttiness! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 11th September 2008
For the record - I've never asked for end - in any sense of the word. However - in the school yard sense of the word - you're a very naughty boy. Ever practise contortion? ;) :grin  
 
Enjoyed - but not a pretty picture! 
 
Phil

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 11th September 2008
Just read the first review. If there is an after life, you'd have plenty of time to practise. Still, if it's heaven, practice won't be needed. Dream on, eh?
I am, Phil . . .
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 11th September 2008
. . . indeed, a very naughty boy! 
 
'Nuff said - I shall pm you on this, a jolly topic! 
 
Ho! 
 
Thank you for your review! 
 
Beers! 
 
John X
Ha! Ha!
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 11th September 2008
Absolutely, Phil! 
 
Our reviews got tangled up, time-wise! 
 
More beers! 
 
John X

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