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| Sacrifice | |
| By raymondo | ||||
| 18 September 2008 | ||||
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This started life as an exercise to write a story with as few words as possible without losing the "plot". So, from 500 I've whittled it down to 134. I think it could do with a further "trim" what do you think. I’d wanted a rearrangement for weeks, needed better access to my PC screens. With the air conditioning down, I wanted everything closer to the window for better ventilation and light ‘A change is as good as a rest’, - they say. I had some unexpected help… Three, what I assumed were removal men, assisted me. They were grey of face and boiler suits, silent. They proceeded to pull out cables, drag out cabinets, and bookcases. I heard the crash of computers dumped outside my office window. They’d re-arranged the desks…then left. Two returned, followed by two, even more expressionless men supporting a battered soldier who leaked blood over my executive blue shag pile. Well, I thought. May as well go home. We all have to make small sacrifices in time of war.
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