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Poetry
Seasonal Haiku
By sutpau
19 September 2008
 Spring

Spring breaks;

All in nature’s play,

Happy beginnings make!

 Winter

Winter abounds;

Icy breath chills all nature around,

Slumber season!

 Autumn

Autumn prepares:

Amber and golden leaves fall,

Nature’s colour show!

 Summer

Summer warms;

Heating play, browns nature all around,

Season of excess!

 

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Written by Brett (987 comments posted) 19th September 2008
I realise that the western idea of the haiku 5-7-5 is not wholly accepted by purists and pedants these days, but these do not seem to follow any related form. And even when read do not naturally flow to make a succinct statement. Sorry. 
 
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