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AMAZING IN GOA
By JohnnyD
20 September 2008

Darkness all around

The soaring waves

Unpolluted breeze

Disturbing the peace of the night

The sea touching feet gracefully

The slipping sand beneath

Filling life in amazing proportion

What an amazing feeling it is!




Johnny D

20th September 2008

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Written by marko2 (9 comments posted) 20th September 2008
I wish I was there matey. This shows the power of a few simple words arranged to paint a vivid and detailed picture. Cool. It's why I prefer written entertainment to visual, I have my own picture in my minds eye of what you have written about. Visual work almost forces you to accept someone elses views and ideas. Free your mind man and you will fly to where ever you want to go! 8)

Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 20th September 2008
Very nice poem. 
Sounds like a great place indeed.

Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 20th September 2008
Oh what a lovely place for a holiday. I hope you had a wonderful time.
Yes, it is heaven like...
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 21st September 2008
Thank you one and all... Goa is the most wonderful place in India and one of the tourist attraction for one and all to visit it for its naural beauty. Yes, I wish I can invite one and all from GW to be here with me at this particular hour in Goa... the most amazing tourist destination... I am having a great time here Josie, Fled and Marko... wish you all were here with me.... it is paradise! 
 
Johnny D

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