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Memories are paints, the future a canvas
By Steve_K
20 September 2008

 

Moving between us the tide of time

It is years since we have met or talked

And still I cannot forget you

Even though, so eager have I tried


Your tongue, your lips, your eyes

When I used place my hands on your eyelids

They fluttered like a butterfly 

As you open and shut them in time


6 years 10 months and 3 days

I counted last night

Tempted to look you up

And down again, as in the past


Procrastination bars my way

Like a steel gate of a Summers meadow

 


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Written by Brett (987 comments posted) 21st September 2008
I like this, Steve, and am at a loss why it has not yet been reviewed. So many poets (myself included) fall into that trap of 'dressing up' their language - here it is as honest as can be, and all the more effective. 
The 2nd stanza, lines 3 to 4, I found very tender, almost tangible. 
My only quibble is the title - but what does that matter! 
Enjoyed. 
Cheers

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