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Poetry
Our Souls
By Katanga
21 September 2008

Our Souls

 

My body’s gone, and now, in cruel reverse,

my tears, where once my future was bright-clear,

are destiny’s path, full-followed, unrehearsed.

I see my end in quaffing one last beer.

 

My vision’s clouded, for you are not here,

my daytime and my midnight's constant nurse.

I hide my eyes from morning’s light and fear

my body’s gone, and now, in cruel reverse,

 

will you - forgive me if this sounds perverse –

come closer, fold your body gently near

me, as my soul in you I now disperse

my tears, where once my future was bright-clear?

 

You swirl before me, water in the weir,

with love that lingers longer than a curse

can outlive anger. Rage’s futile tears

are destiny’s path, full-followed, unrehearsed.

 

I hold you now, miasmic. What is worse

than clinging to a ghost for wasted years?

In alcohol I shall myself immerse.

I see my end in quaffing one last beer.

 

So here we sit, befuddled, feeling queer,

dip deep into our wallet, or our purse.

Will angels come to save our souls, my dear?

Well no, my Love. I’ll write another verse -

                                             my body’s gone.

 

  

Reviews

Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 21st September 2008
Beautiful, very sad though. 
I love some of your word usage : befuddled and quaffing are so very English. 
It seems whenever I take a break from poetry and return I always find myself reading another heart felt cracker from your good self 
;)  
xxx

Written by Fledermaus (3490 comments posted) 21st September 2008
You nicely played around with the words indeed. Ghosts, souls... Most interesting.

Written by Brett (987 comments posted) 23rd September 2008
Another rondeau redouble, Tolstoy? You do like these.  
So do I in fact. A very admirable attempt, not as good as your 'Dinah's Eyes' in my opinion. 
As already mentioned some nice language and phrases here. 
The title? Thought you'd been listening to Derek and Clive again! 
Cheers

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