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By grace
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22 September 2008 |
A quiet thought.
To share silence
when a bridge of love
spans the quiet air,
is a double blessing,
a gift of peace,
a joining of souls,
come. . . sit with me.
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Gentle request
Written by patterjack (1435 comments posted) 22nd September 2008 | Probably not the freshest of ideas -- but the basic image is good , and the request of the last line is fitting .
Pleasant indeed
patterjack |
Written by grace (173 comments posted) 22nd September 2008 | You're right Patterjack, not a new theme but I'm glad you found it pleasant,
thank you for your thoughtful comments,
Pamx  | Wonderful . . .
Written by Katanga (1515 comments posted) 25th September 2008 | . . . in its gentle, quiet simplicity, Pam!
I don't think it matters that it's not a 'new theme'.
I mean, how many new themes are there?
I think almost all poetry relies on well-worn themes - it's the freshness of expression that counts, and I find this very fresh.
And your last line is a cracker!
Cheers!
John X |
Written by grace (173 comments posted) 25th September 2008 | Than you so much John, you are so kind and I'm so pleased you enjoyed this,
blessings, Pamx |
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