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Blossom - haiku
By Snodlander
22 September 2008

Yes, I know, and I'm sorry.  I'll try to review stuff, but I am so busy at the moment.



You called me 'Blossom'.
Autumn stripped my blooms away.
Are my twigs still cute?

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Written by Phil (6997 comments posted) 27th September 2008
Hi Bob. Good to see you're still around. Doing a bit of catch up reading and saw this. Perhaps not in the tradition of Haiku in terms of tone - but it brought on a big smile and that has a high value of its own. 
 
Phil

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