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By Songster
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03 April 2005 |
Lavender Mothballs Sweet scented lavender, mothballs and summer - and time slips back. I am a child in the room where great aunt Gertie lives within her memories. She's stroking her grey cat; its contented purr thrums in the shadows and we long for sun. We eat the chocolate she gives us though it has a taste of mothballs; she hoards it with her lace-trimmed underwear. She talks of things long past - again she tells us how it happened that, one day, she met the Queen, Victoria.
We shift and fidget, wish out visit over. Beckoning us is her neglected garden where a tortoise dozes on a warm stone path. We think of outside, long to rediscover the old toad crouching in a disused drain. Songster.
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fabulous Written by kevinrobson71 (42 comments posted) 3rd April 2005 | | a childhood a lot of people can identify with-very strong , evocative | Brilliant Written by Betsie (30 comments posted) 15th April 2005 | Really love this one - you planted the picture in my mind. And you evoked that feeling of impatience that the very young have when in the company of the very old and having to suffer 'duty visit'. Line one - last stanza: did you mean our and not out? | Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 15th April 2005 | Thanks Betsie, You are quite right. Out is a misprint which I did not notice. I went back to my work but the original is now so peculiar it's obviously too late to change it. |
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